Childhood,Childhood范文(2)
来源:网络整理发布时间:2015-03-18
可以看出，作者尝试用大量的比喻和描写来表达真情实感，如“childhood is like a paper-plane flying in the sky，like a piece of white paper"等描写就包含诗情。但是用外语写好散文谈何容易，本文不乏词不达意之处，语言也不够精炼，有些描写也许是依据中文思维，令人费解，如The rosy clouds allured my memory和As a mystery，childhood created me a colorful thought．As a gift，childhood flourished my whole life。另外，正文部分若能增加一些具体的事实和细节，将更能打动人心。
(点评教师：辛红叶) Childhood 英语作文网收集整理
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