Contemporary Culture,Only Part of the Picture 英语作文网收集整理

Contemporary Culture,Only Part of the Picture
It is argued that contemporary culture has great relevance for students today. There is a good deal of truth in this idea.However, it does not necessarily mean that colleges and universities should offer more courses on popular music, film, advertising and television.
Surely, our lives are greatly influenced by contemporary culture since TV programmes and popular MTVs are shown on television day and night. Advertisement and commercials are seen here and there, and film is certainly a hot topic in parties.Having little knowledge about contemporary culture, it may be difficult for you to understand what people around you are thinking of or talking about. What is more, it is dangerous to some extent if you fail to "live with" contemporary culture in a proper way. For example, you will probably be submerged and confused by TV programmes unless you can tell what programmes are worth watching and what appear on TV are true.
Meanwhile, we should be aware that contemporary culture is only part of our culture. Classical arts and literature of the past are not only what used to be popular years age but what last and survive through many generations. They are the essence of human civilization, treasures that our ancestors handed down to us. In Paris, it is believed that a well educated person should master at least one classic musical instrument such as piano or violin, to inherit the culture of the past which they are so proud of, and to understand the way that people in the past saw the world.
Arts and literatures of the past also have great influence on today's society. As the contemporary culture is developed from culture before it, it is necessary to know the arts and literatures in the past in order to have a deeper insight into what is happening today and to foresee the coming future.
In addition, although hundreds or even thousands of years have passed since the creation of those classical arts and literatures, quite a lot of people still enjoy them. Shakespeare's plays are put on stage every week and the Lorvre is flooded with tourists from all over the world every day!
Therefore, I support the idea that colleges and universities should offer various courses of both contemporary culture and culture of the past. Only through a balanced understanding of the two can a person truly understand the culture and society of today. And only in this way can a student be truly well educated.

简 评
此文是一篇较为典型的分析论辩性的文章。文章分析讨论大学是否应该开设更多当代流行文化的课程，但作者并没有在开头直接提出自己的观点，而是先退一步肯定流行文化对人们生活的影响，再提出自己的观点，即传统文化也有其重要的价值和影响。文章最后再回到论题上，不偏不倚地指出两方面的课程都是重要的，只有将两者很好地结合才能培养高素质的大学生。这样一种论辩方式最能以理服人。
现在许多论辩性的文章显得过于偏激，观点有失偏颇，说理的过程中往往只从自己的角度出发，自说自话。比如这篇文章讨论的问题，就有同学大肆批判流行文化，将其贬得毫无价值可言。这样的说理很难具有说服力。另一个值得注意的问题，就是说理过程中的语气。